Walt: use better words
Mum stepped...
Mum stepped in a cruise ship and inhaled the nice, salty air. “Honey, do we really have to go on this honeymoon?” questioned Dad, rolling his eyes. “Yes, we have to!” demanded Mum. “I just hope our kids are being extremely exceptional behaviour while we’re gone”. Meanwhile at home, the kids were savaged beasts in jungle.
While mum was unloading the luggage, Dad was too busy distressing about shipwrecks and unknown creatures plotting to destroy this ship. He had a pale face mixed with gloomy eyes and nail-chopping teeth. “Hon, don’t to worry”, mum said with a warm voice “you really shouldn’t distress about creatures or shipwrecks nothing is going to happen”.
A few hours later, there was a rock. Next another rock, but more forceful than the last. “Oh my god! We’re going to die!” Dad screeched repeatedly. All of sudden there was a colossal octopus. It was a bloodshot red, with tempestuous eyes and an agonizing stare. The air was filled with bellows and snivelling sounds. “Everyone hurry, to the docks now!” demanded the captain.
Everyone quickly scrambled to the docks. Abruptly, Dad just stood there. frozen almost. The panic made him completely, glued his feet to the ground. Long story short, Dad got gobbled by the gigantic squid.
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