Walt: write a paragraph on the character.
Big daddy
Big daddy has a reputation of being big and tough but after witnessing him crying up on the flying fox I think not. Even though that he’s big on the outside really he’s actually squirmy on the inside. Big daddy was afraid of heights, I know this because he was refusing to go down the flying fox by himself. Big daddy doesn't like to be embarrassed. The evidence is that when Big daddy and Philip went down the flying fox and when the children ask why they took so long, he just ignored them and walked away.
1 comments:
Hi , Alisi nice story but maybe you should put a bit more of who big daddy actually is ? (:
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