Walt: write a creative story in paragraphs.
My island of paradise
If I had an island of paradise I would obviously have a relaxing resort. My island would have to be big for like 10 people. My friends will be on my island and celebrities.
Also there would be a very special zoo. In it would be some monkeys, gorillas, zebras, gazelles. If you’re one of my specials friends they will even feed the animals, if they want to. They will be some blue whales and tropical fish, all deep the sea animals. We will even swim with the dolphins.
One part of the island will be a fill of science laboratories. I love human body science, it’s so fascinating. They bits of brains, bottles of blood, bins full of hearts. Everyone will finding cures for diseases. Every single person will study the human body.
The last part of the island would music studios. The celebrities would be creating music. Music would surround the air. And disco halls where every night will a musical one.
This is what I would have on my own secluded island
3 comments:
HI Alisi, I love your ideas, and I hope I am one of your favourite friends. I like the part where you said, there will be a music studio with a disco running, that is a great idea. If your island of paradise became reality in 10-15 years, how would you feel?
Your ideas are very much you. You really thought of it. I love the animals you included very rarrh. Work hard and it will come true
Hey Alisi You did well on your story wouldn't it be great to have a island of paradise
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