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Friday, 17 May 2013

Dabir the Donkey


Dabir the Donkey

In the beginning Dabir and his master had just stopped in Egypt. Dabir held loads of dates. When his master unloaded all the dates, Dabir  kicked a rock on the beehive and it burst open.  The bees were not happy with this and that is how the problem began.

While the bees were chasing Dabir, he ran around the pyramids. After  a few minutes the bees didn’t care and went back to their hive. After that it led to another problem. Not far from him, there were camels lying in the sun. Dabir started kicking sand on the camels’ eyes. The camels were started to get really fed up with Dabir and chased him Dabir ran around the pyramids seven times. But after a few minutes the camels did not care anymore and went back to lying in the hot sun. Later on it led to a further problem.  He felt bored and not far from him were some lazy crocodiles. So he just went and stood all over them. The first couple of times the crocodiles ignored it, but when kept on stepping on over them they got fed up and chased him. Dabir ran towards the steps on the pyramid, when he reached the top he noticed that the crocodile wasn’t behind him. He didn’t get all he wanted was to fun, but all he did was annoy everyone.

At the end, Dabir was so tired that when master loaded him up again, he fell flat the ground. The master pulled the rope tied to Dabir’s neck , he pulled three times. But Dabir ran and all the goods fell off him. The master got angry


2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Aloha Alisi,
Your story about Dabir the donkey is so eye-opening that when I read the very first sentence I wanted to keep on reading. I really like your stunning words and adjectives. Did you make up the story by yourself and was it difficult to get the ideas all in the right place?

Anonymous said...

Actually it was an egypt myth, Sajiha. This is actually an abridged version of the real myth of Dabir the donkey.

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