Tuesday, 27 November 2012
Friday, 16 November 2012
Reading with family
Walt: learn, create, share.I made an eBook for room 1 and room 2. It was about our topic, Animal features. We used the photos our class took from the zoo. They took at least over 400 photos. The hard part was to make the story easy to read because we were reading to 5 and 6 year old. The easy part picking a picture to go on each page. My favorite part was when my brother, JJ came and read to me. If I can do it again I would improve on making the story more informative. It was fun reading to the little kids.
Tuesday, 6 November 2012
Making history
Walt: write a story in sequence.
It was late afternoon when Jeff was going to be flung into space. There were two large trees and the longest elastic band. Jeff was in the middle of this structure. He said his goodbyes to his loved ones. “We will be in contact soon“ shouted the head of Mission control. And with a great whoosh! Off went Jeff.
As he traveled through the atmosphere, he saw very bizarre animals. He saw a man with the legs of a horse, a lady with a tail of a fish, a young girl with skin as rough as tree trunks. Suddenly, Jeff was becoming unconscious. “Jeff do you read me ?” shouted the leader of Mission control. But Jeff couldn’t hear.
Jeff was in a withering daydream. All his thoughts and fears had completely vanished. He found himself floating in mid-air. “What’s happening? Where’s Earth ?“ whispered Jeff. There was no reply. Before he knew it a huge meteorite came at him at an incredible speed.
Finally, Jeff woke just in time. With fright, Jeff was going down. He didn’t know what to do. His mind was completely blank. “Jeff open the parachute now, now, now hurry!” shouted the Mission control. Jeff had no time to lose, so he opened his parachute and had a very cautious, safe landing on a humongous pink marshmallow. The whole of Mission control was exhilarated with the outcome of this special mission. “I did it” he howled.
At the end of the day Jeff made history. He was the first man to break the sound barrier.
It was late afternoon when Jeff was going to be flung into space. There were two large trees and the longest elastic band. Jeff was in the middle of this structure. He said his goodbyes to his loved ones. “We will be in contact soon“ shouted the head of Mission control. And with a great whoosh! Off went Jeff.
As he traveled through the atmosphere, he saw very bizarre animals. He saw a man with the legs of a horse, a lady with a tail of a fish, a young girl with skin as rough as tree trunks. Suddenly, Jeff was becoming unconscious. “Jeff do you read me ?” shouted the leader of Mission control. But Jeff couldn’t hear.
Jeff was in a withering daydream. All his thoughts and fears had completely vanished. He found himself floating in mid-air. “What’s happening? Where’s Earth ?“ whispered Jeff. There was no reply. Before he knew it a huge meteorite came at him at an incredible speed.
Finally, Jeff woke just in time. With fright, Jeff was going down. He didn’t know what to do. His mind was completely blank. “Jeff open the parachute now, now, now hurry!” shouted the Mission control. Jeff had no time to lose, so he opened his parachute and had a very cautious, safe landing on a humongous pink marshmallow. The whole of Mission control was exhilarated with the outcome of this special mission. “I did it” he howled.
At the end of the day Jeff made history. He was the first man to break the sound barrier.
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